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Poster feedback

Hey there Onlooker, CreativeCookie here and today’s post is about my poster feedback and the improvements I made to complete it.

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My poster I reviewed

I held a focus group and here and the responses I improved upon:

‘The background colour might not be seen as professional, the electric blue is quite harsh and doesn’t really reflect the genre.’

‘I don’t fully understand that image of the eye, draws attention away from the title.’

‘There is quite a lot of text. To make it more eye-catching and effecting you could shorten the sentences.’

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My new and improved poster!

I am very happy with this version of my poster. I feel it fits my film much more. I will copy the house style onto my magazine also.

 

Magazine review feedback

Hey there Onlooker, CreativeCookie here and today’s post is about my magazine review feedback and the improvements I have made to complete it.

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My magazine I reviewed

I held a focus group and here and the responses I improved upon:

‘The text is very difficult to read in places. Maybe move it so it’s more clear’ / ‘The text would be clearer if you put a box behind it’.

‘The rated 12A looks a liitle bit alone in placement, perhaps move it so it looks more fitting’.

‘Fix the spelling mistakes, eg. Thilling’.

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I tried to add boxes behind the text, I feel it looks weird so I made a different change instead.
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My new and improved magazine!

I am very happy with this version of my magazine. I feel it fits my film much more. I like how it fits the house style overall.